Elegias of the heart

Elegias of the heart

A Poem by Ghost47
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Just because someone leaves doesn't mean it's goodbye. It just means we have somewhere to be. But we'll always be back, no matter how long it takes

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The sun is setting
In the western sky
And it's time
To say goodbye

A long journey it was
One of many days
But alas it has ended
We now go our ways

But oh don't you cry
But oh don't be sad
For we take memories
Of what fun we had

Come over for tea at times
We can dance and sing and talk
And don't you bother knocking
I'll leave the door unlocked

© 2018 Ghost47


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This is a lovely bittersweet goodbye that highlights the sweet in a soothing way. Only thing I noticed it "But alas is(it) has ended". Nicely done!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghost47

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I'll correct it right away

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Added on March 6, 2018
Last Updated on March 8, 2018
Tags: Goodbyes, memories, lyrical poem

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Ghost47
Ghost47

Thimphu, Thimphu, Bhutan



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