the sun and the dew

This is dedicated to someone who shall be known only as J. It gives a view into how my brain functions (or fails to do so) when J is around.

you are the sun,

my thoughts the droplets

of dew on the petals

of blossoming flowers;

when you are present

my thoughts evaporate

and when you are gone

my thoughts return

and grow in number

until once again

we are together

Author's Note

keep in mind that it is 3am and I haven't had a decent night's sleep in months. other than that, please, have at it

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i really enjoyed this :) well done, ladybro!

[Somiena]

Thank you, ladybro! I quite enjoyed it, too, though now I feel like it wasn't a good kind of thoughtless/speechless I was feeling; I was literally just not thinking things through during that time.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

well, think of it this way... "today was good, today was fun, tomorrow is another one; (dr, seuss)...it was fun stuffs before but youve got a bright new day to look forward to :D

[Somiena]

yeah, I just find it funny that the description in my poem can be taken in a really cutesy way, but if you really think about it it's like, "hey by the way when I'm around you I'm literally incapable of thought which is probably why I made so many stupid decisions with you around, but now that you're not around my hindsight is 20/20... but if I see you again I'll stop thinking again (but this time it'll be more like I'll stop thinking about the good things because I'll be burning with anger)". yay for double meanings :D

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

huzza!!! xD

[Eryn ♪]

Have at what this is great. Though my opinion might be biased.

[Somiena]

Thank you! I'm glad someone likes it :D