Let us go

When the past wont let you go and you can not seem to stop thinking about it

Love the life you live

Breathe in the crisp fall air

Feel the sunlight rays on your skin

Morning dew on the leaves of the willow tree

standing in the morning sun

I stare into the emptiness that seems to surround me 

I cant find myself anymore

Thoughts of you fill my head

My love for you isn't the same

Do I care for you? Yes 

Are you my world, my everything? No

You changed that years ago 

I don't trust you, not anymore

How long will it last? 

How long does it take to trust someone? 

Someone who changed everything that you used to be

What is trust?

Trust in the dictionary is firm belief in the reliability, truth, ability, 

or strength of someone or something 

I have forgiven the act that was made 

But what we had is no longer 

I feel trapped and unable to breathe 

I put myself there 

I could have left that day and gone

Gone where?

Stayed with who?

I had no one to turn to

While you had her to comfort you

I thought this was all behind me

But you and you alone brought those fears back 

Fears that I wasn't enough for you 

Why can't you tell me the truth

Now I have him to comfort me

Now I have him to fill my emptiness

But What then when I don't have all of him 

What then when he only gets half of me 

Because you wont let go of the other part of me  

Reviews

[Mitch]

This separation is hard and you can feel that in this piece. Even in moving on, you don't know if you can give a new person 100% since there is a piece of yourself still in the old relationship.

How much of a stickler are you on grammar usage and structure? There are about 2 to 3 small adjustments I see that would make your piece flow. I don't want the layout of your words to take away from the emotion you have laid out here.