today is the day

today is the day

A Poem by solstice_7
"

I don't know yet, just now writing it. :)

"

I wake to the pain of the Sunlight intruding

and taking me from a dream with you by my side

I struggle to leave, but the day it won't let me

slowly I'm losing you to the light

I rise to the call of all that I must do

I shower with eyes closed as I search for your smile

today is the day I accept of your leaving

now all I can do is wait your return

nine hours away, it sounds like it's nothing

but I wake in pain when I wake without you

You are all that I love, you are all that I long for

you are all that I'm missing in the light of the day

tomorrow will come, with or without you

I can't close this door on all that I know

come home.

 

© 2008 solstice_7


Author's Note

solstice_7
I know this piece is simple, so is the emotion

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The emotion is far from simple, you have here a pouring out of something tantamount to grief.
Your story told in prose form is poignant and well-placed. I'm not sure if these are lyrics, but whichever way it goes you have a winner...congrats :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2008

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solstice_7
solstice_7

Denver, CO



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hello, I have spent over half of my life as a vocalist for several different bands, but something that I learned early on was that it was the writing aspect of creativity where I found my true voice. .. more..