Just You and I

A man feeling love that isn't yet recipricated from an attractive colleague.

          Just You and I   

A poem about a waiting love.......

 

I see you and I quickly feel so alive Amazing how things change when you arrive You can illuminate any room my dear It's impossible not to be happy with you so near The way you give when others don't even bother The way you make others around you so much better When you're missing I notice a change and it's though everything is so strange When I think of you I picture your face To no longer see you would be a disgrace I worry about how you are feeling, who you are dating All the while my heart just keeps up its aching Will we ever be together just you and I or will it just be one horrendous goodbye?

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Simple, Properly Executed, Properly Rhymed,
I must say - This poem is way closer to you heart, You wrote this piece of work when you really loved someone. But never expressed it.

I must visit your page often to check out your writings :)

Over all Better work..
Keep rolling you personal experiences into black-white..

Kind Regards,
Vikrantsingh Parmar

[soliloquy]

Thank you so much! I appreciate such a helpful review.

[Vikrantsingh]

You are welcome mate :)

[Sophy.]

This is a wonderful poem in that every single person can relate to this in some way. Everyone has had that one crush that has no idea they exist (or so they think) and everyone wants to know if this person could be the one they're supposed to be with forever. Really great write!

[soliloquy]

Thank you so much! I APPRECIATE that.

[Claudia Stark]

Awwww!

[soliloquy]

Thanks for reading Beth. I appreciate you taking the time since I consider you one of the best writers at this site.

[Frieda P]

This is like both sides of the coin to me, the grandest part of love and the lows. It reads very easily and the flow is smooth and comfortable. Nice one.

[soliloquy]

You are too kind Frieda. I appreciate you taking the time.

[jdr / Jennifer]

This poem holds mountaints of meaning- it speaks to a piece of us all. Whether its a love that we hope for but are never able to reach or a love that we gave our heart to and now to us, they never speak. And only asking to be together, should be forever. But we ask ourselves, will it just be a very sad goodbye. And still, our hearts we wear upon our sleeves. Brilliant piece- thank you for sharing this.

[soliloquy]

Thanks Jenn for such an encouraging comment! How sweet of you.

[Anna]

This is an adorable poem, it's like the surface of the feelings of a breakup, it's not tear wrenching, but more thought provoking. I really like it! :)

[soliloquy]

Thanks Anna for reading and reviewing. I appreciate that.

[Becky C Strukamp]

this poem speaks to me and say.. I am yearning of a love that is hoped for and dreamed...but one that has not taken place...the constant of hope ..one can always hope..we thrive on it...

Great poem Sweetie!

[soliloquy]

Thanks sweetheart......

[Evan Kayes]

I can relate to this. Took me three years to ask out the girl my heart so badly craved (in the end she was the one who asked me out haha!). Seeing her everyday, in relationships with other men, so emotionally far away, and yet having to sit so physically close to her.... i can understand your struggle. My appreciations and congratulations on a fine written piece :)

[soliloquy]

Thank you for your excellent review.....

[That_Girl]

Awh this made me sad. Reminds me somewhat of the favorite (can't remember the title, but you know what I'm talking about) gone awry.... you know? Good write. Make sure the "it is" ones have the apostrophe though. :)

[soliloquy]

Thank you my friend.....I'm so happy you read it and left a review. Hugs....

You are still my fav. I hope your final went well?

[That_Girl]

I called my professor and told him I couldn't walk. Got my dr to send him a note.... So we've tentatively rescheduled it for tomorrow.

[soliloquy]

Oh good. Did you get rest then? I hope......

Please take it easy Avy.

[That_Girl]

I'm working on it. :) Thanks, I'll be fine.