Just You and I

Just You and I

A Poem by soliloquy
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A man feeling love that isn't yet recipricated from an attractive colleague.

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          Just You and I   

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A poem about a waiting love.......

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I see you and I quickly feel so alive
Amazing how things change when you arrive

You can illuminate any room my dear
It's impossible not to be happy with you so near

The way you give when others don't even bother
The way you make others around you so much better

When you're missing I notice a change
and it's though everything is so strange

When I think of you I picture your face
To no longer see you would be a disgrace

I worry about how you are feeling, who you are dating
All the while my heart just keeps up its aching

Will we ever be together just you and I
or will it just be one horrendous goodbye?

© 2012 soliloquy


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Simple, Properly Executed, Properly Rhymed,
I must say - This poem is way closer to you heart, You wrote this piece of work when you really loved someone. But never expressed it.

I must visit your page often to check out your writings :)

Over all Better work..
Keep rolling you personal experiences into black-white..

Kind Regards,
Vikrantsingh Parmar

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soliloquy

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate such a helpful review.
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

You are welcome mate :)



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This was a good write, Kyle. Very well written, I'm sure many of us can relate to it, it is difficult to be in love with someone when they don't know. I got lost in this, wonderful imagery.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steve

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I appreciate that!
s y e

11 Years Ago

Who are you
Tender, little ode to the one who holds your heart.

In the world of writing, poetry doesn't necessarily have to be flowery and filled with metaphor, while metaphors are my bread and butter, I've realized that direct, literal lines are just as impressive... you have proved that here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steve

11 Years Ago

Thank you for such a kind comment.
This was definitely a great write, K. :) I can definitely say I can relate to having a crush on someone who never seemed to know I was crushing on him, though, in the end I would up marrying that man. :) This was a great poem! :) Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soliloquy

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the great encouragement. :0)
Abby

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome. :)
This is quite simply, lovely. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wonderful imagery .. I got lost in your words. Thank you. I do hope you are well x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soliloquy

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! What a nice comment.
Every person has felt like this at one point in time. What a relatable piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steve

11 Years Ago

Thank you! You are kind.
This poem has a sweet simplicity that I really enjoy. Great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soliloquy

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jessica!
Wow, this is really amazing,
like your rhyming.
Love the emotions thru out!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soliloquy

11 Years Ago

So thank you so much......
Lovely poem, I can relate to this scenario too!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Posted 11 Years Ago


soliloquy

11 Years Ago

You have a way with words......thank you for reading!

I enjoyed this very much, Paul. It's very relatable. Loving someone from a distance. Everyone has experienced that in one way or another. It has a great flow. Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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soliloquy

11 Years Ago

Thank you my dear.
Alejandra

11 Years Ago

No problem. :)

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