Just You and I

A man feeling love that isn't yet recipricated from an attractive colleague.

          Just You and I   

A poem about a waiting love.......

 

I see you and I quickly feel so alive Amazing how things change when you arrive You can illuminate any room my dear It's impossible not to be happy with you so near The way you give when others don't even bother The way you make others around you so much better When you're missing I notice a change and it's though everything is so strange When I think of you I picture your face To no longer see you would be a disgrace I worry about how you are feeling, who you are dating All the while my heart just keeps up its aching Will we ever be together just you and I or will it just be one horrendous goodbye?

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Simple, Properly Executed, Properly Rhymed,
I must say - This poem is way closer to you heart, You wrote this piece of work when you really loved someone. But never expressed it.

I must visit your page often to check out your writings :)

Over all Better work..
Keep rolling you personal experiences into black-white..

Kind Regards,
Vikrantsingh Parmar

[soliloquy]

Thank you so much! I appreciate such a helpful review.

[Vikrantsingh]

You are welcome mate :)

[Johanna]

I like this one :) The topic never gets old

[wandering daughter]

such a nice lovely poem about that special person in your life.
it has a sad side to it, but also just a loving vibe. I really like the beginning.

[soliloquy]

You are so very kind...thank you!

[Katerina Felinova]

Ah, I love this one. ^_^

Good rhythm, nice word chose throughout and a very powerful subject. Reading this made me think of my poem "The Lion and The Lamb" so I relate on a very personal level with this. Very nice job!

--Katerina < 3

[soliloquy]

This one came from pure emotion.

[Aseel]

very nice poem and easy to understand that i have undrstood all the vocab in it :)

[soliloquy]

Thanks aseel!! I'm glad you liked it.

[NA]

A great poem of unrequited love...really enjoyed :)

[soliloquy]

Thank you so much.

[allura]

I completely agree with Sophy, this is a very nice piece of poetry, that people can relate to.

[Steve]

Thank you! You are kind.

[Eileenws]

Wonderful poem about someone who has a crush or infatuation. The narrator is not bitter, which I like. I really like the ending. It sums it up.
Eileen

[smilempsn]

Simple yet attractive poem. :)