Let Me Go

Let Me Go

A Poem by Carlie

Some things I’ll never know

I’ve got to let them go

It’s too much pressure now

Please just let me go

 

It is my time to run

To get away somehow

Don’t try to stop me now

Please just let me go

 

No more looking back

For pleasing everyone

Is now beyond my grasp

Please just let me go

 

You don’t want me now

Not the way I am

So just get of my case

Please just let me go

 

I know you love me so

Just not enough to let me live

So don’t stand in my way

Please just let me go

 

I can’t be that girl

The one you want from me

The time has come

Please just let me go

 

No hard feelings from me

Just one last plea

It’s time to move on now

Please just let me go

© 2011 Carlie


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Wonderful write.
The repetition ,"Please just let me go" at the end of all stanzas indicates your determination to live.
Expressed eloquently.

Posted 11 Years Ago


NICE really great work .

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Carlie
Carlie

Pocatello, ID



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