The Most Beautiful

The Most Beautiful

A Story by Rain Kissed Secret
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Toni. Here is where I tell you everything.

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Walking into the school there are two beautiful friends. Both unique, but one is better. In this school there are beautiful people. All great, but they are better. What makes these two friends want to go into this beautiful place, are they insane? You ask yourself this. Do they have low self-esteem? Maybe, but they know the truth. Every beauty has a problem. And the more beautiful you are. The harder you get.

The most beautiful of the two friends has had it rough. The lesser, easy still. The most beautiful of the two friends has had many people leave her. The lesser, easy still. The most beautiful of the two friends has a heart made of gold. The lesser... has a heart made of metal.

The lesser, and the most work great together, don't you think? Balance each other out. But how many times can these two take before they are forced to deal with reality? The lesser may not have much. But that's all she has. The most beautiful, has everything, and nothing, and then, everything again. She has knowledge, and strength. Determination. Loyalty. Her head is on straight, and she can make it in the world. The lesser... she has nothing worth mentioning.

You may feel bad for the one who has less. You may feel bad for the one who has more. Just remember that even if they have more, that doesn't mean they deserve it, and just because they may deserve it, doesn't mean that they should or will get it.

The lesser sees this. She is smart, and can observe the world. She has no distractions that will keep her from seeing the things she needs to see. But she is picky. And wounded. She sees what she wants to see. Nothing more, nothing less.

The most beautiful sees everything. She is smart, and can observe the world. She can keep distractions that will keep her from seeing the things she needs to see out of her way. But, alas, she is picky. And wounded. She sees what she needs to see. Everything, always.

The lesser and most beautiful walk into this school. Linked together by their elbows. They are smiling. Laughing. Loving. They do not care about the people around them. They are having fun. Living life. They know their weaknesses. They know their negatives. They fix them when they can, leave them behind when they can't. They are together. And they are glad to be.

These two very beautiful people are great. They know whats around them. They can feel it crushing them. But they don't care. They will get out alive.. Because they have the other to help dig them out.

They don't envy, they don't hate. They work together, and they will work. Even if the lesser has to pull a few strings to get there. So bring it on, my world! My dears. Because we will succeed. Even if you are trying to bring us down.




© 2010 Rain Kissed Secret


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Ok, this is a very interesting peice, I loved the way you wrote it, no names, vauge, a lot left for the imagination, yet a lot said. That's what I think of the writing itself.

Now, about what you're actually saying in the writing, you can't say any one person is better than any other one person because it's subjective and cannot be measured. Really, and your vision must be blurred because you truely see the world oddly my friend. The most has a heart, made of blood and tissue just like everyone else, and so does the lesser, the only difference is the lesser cares more about a select few, and the most cares the same for everyone, each have their own ballance and each have the same amount of love to give. They just give it differently.

Luna

Posted 14 Years Ago



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