Hairy Story

Hairy Story

A Poem by Rain Kissed Secret
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I call it a dotted poem. xD Seriously, this is just me goofing off. Have fun with it, come up with millions of ways to view this. I'd like to see how this works for you. ^-^

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I'd like to tell you about a little story.
About a little girl.
And the bow in her hair.

Once upon a time, in this very story.
A little girl had little curls.
And none of them she could bare.

Every year, on the very same day.
She'd get a hair cut.
And she'd get those little curls a little shorter.

Except, when she was nine.
Her mother let her go to the place herself.
And she decided it would be better to just let the neighbor boy do it for a quarter.

You can imagine the daughters shock.
At finding her mother displeased.
And she thought it was done so beautifully.

Because atop her head.
She had nar a hair.
Cut completely, and fully.

© 2011 Rain Kissed Secret


Author's Note

Rain Kissed Secret
xD I love this.... I just think its so funny, cuz I was never silly enough to do it, but I so wish I was. Now I'm too vein to do it, because I'm a teen and I care what I look like, but man oh MAN would that have been amazingly funny and cute.

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Great job on this humorous and in ways classic story. and lessoned learned.
very whimsical and cute. keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is really good well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice. I like how each line was a sentence.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

T~T
This has happened to some of us.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol this was cute.(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 25, 2010
Last Updated on December 1, 2011

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Rain Kissed Secret
Rain Kissed Secret

Boney Lake, WA



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