Friends

Friends

A Poem by Rain Kissed Secret
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Just something I had to deal with a while back. People loving me all around me but with all the crowds around me, I felt alone, useless. I hope I got you all to see that.

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My friends are always there for me

No matter where I go

 

They have a certain charm to them

That will never cease to grow

 

I never stop thinking about

The memories we have made

 

Making me seem happy

But really all I do is fade...

© 2009 Rain Kissed Secret


Author's Note

Rain Kissed Secret
I think this one is actually okay ^-^ enjoy

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Heh, this one was sweet then suicidal. I approve ^-^ I think you could expand a bit, get in depth and stuff. But that's just me. Being one of your friends it was interesting to read lol.

Luna

Posted 14 Years Ago


The font style certainly added to the effect of disappearing. I liked the poem, but I think you could've emphasized the actual point a little more with words. Good poem, though. Your flow was excellent. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, I really like how you used the fonts to emphasis your point.
I hope times are happier for you now. Great work, keep it up! =]

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 13, 2009
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Rain Kissed Secret
Rain Kissed Secret

Boney Lake, WA



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