A New Start...
A Book by BakaBrook
 Brooklyn... She couldn't have imagined the series of mentally challenging events that were to take place but... she can't back down or run away because if she does... Her nightmares will become real..  © 2012 BakaBrook
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I'm sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes, please bare with me. Thank you xx
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This is amazing! Really, I have very few things to criticize. Grammar like you said, could be a little better but it is still easily understandable. Also, maybe be a little more descriptive. What do the characters look like? How exactly do you feel? It is a great story, I hope you finish soon :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This is amazing! Really, I have very few things to criticize. Grammar like you said, could be a little better but it is still easily understandable. Also, maybe be a little more descriptive. What do the characters look like? How exactly do you feel? It is a great story, I hope you finish soon :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 20, 2012
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BakaBrookNewcastle, England, United Kingdom
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I'm a teenage female by the name Brooklyn.
My hobbies... does music count? Yes? Great. So, Music, guitars, writing, drawing, watching murder series' and documentaries, Anime, Manga, role playing, fan.. more..
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