My name? Sora. I don’t know why I should tell you but it will make the story easier to understand. Obviously, the name “Sora” is an absurd alias. If anything… I really can’t be bothered to write but I have nothing better to do… at least…not yet. Nobody ever talk to me anymore… since “the turn” I’ve been isolated from everyone… including the one person who really made me smile… It doesn’t bother me that I make no physical contact with any human, the rejection is more inviting than any kind of affection from people who don’t need the attention. In fact… I rather enjoy this state of life. The more people that try to get to knoe me the more risks I’ll have to take/ It’s frustrating at times but yet… calming. All I have in this god forsaken world is my guitar, this pen and paper and the constant depressing words dwelling in my disturbed head. The more things that happen to me the more close I come to the undeniable truth. For all that matters is that this gets finished before… never mind, but if nobody reads it then people note, I tried to warn you in the least possible amount of words. Anyway, I’m going to end it here, I have things to do, it’s non of your concern at the moment, you’ll find out soon enough.
Sorry for any grammar mistakes, I just quickly wrote this in French when I finished my work.
I'll continue it when I get the time.
Please review if you like what you read, it means alot to know what I need to improve.
~Brooklyn~
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Interesting I'm curious on what will happen next, love that Sora has the guitar as her only friend in need....love the suspense and Sora's loneliness....great job
Wow. Not bad! You have a few English grammar problems here and there though, but nothing major. It's pretty suspenseful, which I adore. Let me know when you write more please!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Sure! ^_^ I'm currently working on "Forbidden Music" but, I'll see what I can do.
this seemed to be liek a diary telling us nothing, nothing about the character, nothing about his story, just that he was sad
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Anthony, it's a female XD
It was written in French, I haven't had the time to go over it yet .. read moreAnthony, it's a female XD
It was written in French, I haven't had the time to go over it yet but I shall, soon possibly.
12 Years Ago
sorry i was thinking sora of kingdom hearts
12 Years Ago
It's okay ^_^ I got the name from that ages ago. Tried to write a fan fic with the same character bu.. read moreIt's okay ^_^ I got the name from that ages ago. Tried to write a fan fic with the same character but didn't get far XD
12 Years Ago
soraxriku yaoi is adorable
12 Years Ago
IKR!
12 Years Ago
but i was disturbed my mikyxgoofyxdonnald *shudder* to sick
I love the idea that u wrote this in a form of a letter to someone. It really good and curiouse on whats going to happen next if u were to continue this. improvement, none in my opinion sound genuine like someone actually wrote this...
I'm a teenage female by the name Brooklyn.
My hobbies... does music count? Yes? Great. So, Music, guitars, writing, drawing, watching murder series' and documentaries, Anime, Manga, role playing, fan.. more..