New Gig

Band Practice.

Chapter 1: New Gig

“Dudes, we got a new gig!” Kori said while running into the studio that the newly formed band were practicing in.

“No way! When?!” Sam asked, obviously excited for the upcoming event.

“21^st December is the date of our first date so... Next week? But obviously we’ll need to be there a few days earlier to rehearse. We’ll be touring in Newcastle first then moving onto Gateshead. Brooklyn, isn’t this amazing!?” Kori said, more enthusiastic than half of the band. Brooklyn remained silent, bowing her head.

“Brooklyn...?”                

“I can’t do the gig...” She mumbled “I have a family to look after... the 21^st is Amber’s birthday... I’m sorry...” She said, almost whispering.

“Does this mean that I’m taking your place?” Kori asked, looking both sad and slightly excited.

“Yes... it’s about time you had your shot at the stage performing. Besides, the snow that December brings along with it would weaken me out way too much” Brooklyn winked at Kori and passed her Fender Stratocaster, signalling to her that she was ready.

“You... you really want me to take it...? I mean, you’ve never let anyone touch your guitar before...” Kori asked, overwhelmed by the older female’s words.

“Of course I’m sure, I wouldn’t pass my pride over without being completely sure that I’m doing the right thing. But please, take care of him, he cost me £2000”

“£2000 plus the amount of work you’ve had done to him” Alanah added, Alanah is the rhythm guitarist and keyboard/pianists when needed, Brooklyn’s equal to make it simple.

“It’s expected, if you’re willing to buy something that means as much to you as your soul then you should be willing to spend the money to make it your own” Brooklyn shot a warm smile over at Alanah.

“Why aren’t I surprised that YOU would say that?” Alanah giggled lightly and playfully punched Brooklyn’s arm.

“So, who’re we touring with?” Cameron asked, Cameron was the part-time screamer, he is Sam’s brother and had known Brooklyn since she was 13 and Kori since she was 15.

“Um... Oh! We Are The In Crowd.”

Brooklyn’s eyes widened as she dropped to her knees.

“We Are The In Crowd...? You can’t be serious...” Brooklyn said, once again almost whispering.

“I’m not joking, we’re really touring with WATIC” Kori answered.

“You better get me an autograph and a t-shirt!” Brooklyn said, standing up.

“Of course, that’s one thing that I definitely won’t forget”.

Author's Note

Sorry for any grammar mistakes.

Reviews

[K.G]

Too short! but i want more! T.T it really good, just dont like that its kinda short. . .also XD u kinda need to change some of ur stuff like on the first line -“Dudes, we got a new gig!” Kori said while running into the studio that the newly formed band were practicing in.- instead of kori siad you should put kori squeeled in exciment while rushing into the studio etc. just thought that might help make it better :3

[TheDarkCryLove]

i agree with K.G, more discriptive language needs to be used brooklyn, remember some books like 'of mice and men' contain mainly disription, you need to captivate them into the story, set the scene, que the light, start the rolling!

[BakaBrook]

I hated OMAM... I had to do a 2 hour exam based on it XD
But yeah, I know it's bad >-< I'm currently writing the second chapter, it's longer and involving the other characters more, rather than just the few main.

[TheDarkCryLove]

good! i look foreward to it

[BakaBrook]

**Shall continue now... or atleast after Criminal Minds**