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A Poem by Sara

are you only concious of yourself? 

pushing me aside? 

but you notice him

he's not the one that cries....

he has no reason 

he treats the world as it is his own. 

he has no regard, 

or feeling of another

but there's you

are you to blind to see? 

are you really just that numb?  

© 2008 Sara


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Bravo. All the lines were tremondous except the last line.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A nice poem of your frustrated feelings about someone. (= You should give it a title, though!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 28, 2008

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I'm sara!!! Sonja is the one who told me to get this...ummm I'm on soccer bball and track. i snowboard and im an instructor now!woohooo!!! i can't wait to get done with training! i love music...i pret.. more..

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