the end of me(all your lies)

this is a poem I wrote because of the way I have been feeling lately I have been feeling dark and and like the person I wrote this story about is basically some events in my life and somethings r true

you told me you cared
and you'd fix the tear
you told me you'd listen
and not get made
you told me you'd watch me shave
to make sure I didn't cause self inflicted pain
I told you I wanted to kill myself
but all you said was I wouldn't
you never believe
the way I feel
you kill me
you never try to understand
all you do is yell
blame me for everything
you make me wanna die
and make me scream fi
your suppose to be my mother
not a f*****g b***h
you don't ever care about anyone but yourself
you basically are killing me
your the gun
with the bullet
all you need to do is pull the trigger
and i'll be dead
you told me everything I wanted to hear
but all it did was bring me to tears
you lie so bad you make me sick
you  make me want to die so much
your the one pulling the trigger
you made me feel this way
and hes my pay
gun against my head
*gun fires*
this is the way I always dreamed
to die like a saint
no burdens left
its all because of you
I look my life
you happy now
you can live your life like you always wanted
you were the all motivation I needed
to carry out my plan
when I pulled the trigger
I felt so much happiness
because I never have to see you
hear your voice
hear you curse
or deal with you again
you can go to hell
because now I'm dead

Reviews

[TurtleClark]

that place is where i live
the place of pain that never gives
the lies those who say they love us tell
make the tears in our eyes swell
holding us in an eternal hell

guns were never my answer
pills have always offered an unnone thrill
never acting on the pictures in my brain
that had been broken multiple times

dont give in
but i wont call it a sin
cause thats just s**t
so allow it to slide off
we are all her for u

[Color of the Iris]

Bullets never solve the problem, dear.

[Jordan's Back]

you have proven your self a master of the dark arts. You have channeled your pain and sadness throughout this piece and have remarkably rendered it into a masterpiece, Remarkable Job!

[That_Guy]

very emotional write

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most intriguing concept, to be in fear of somthing so common, it's almost tickilish realyl, well done, good read.