Forever Doubting

we all have that little voice feeding us negative thoughts

A tricky little devil

That jealous inner voice

She lurks

But doesn't hide

Slowly poisoning

That once private place

A sweet seducing whisper

That speaks no truth

Preying on weakness

Pouncing on uncertainty

Disappearing and reappearing

But leaving behind the same

Tampered thoughts

A violated mind

Scars reopened

Nerves struck

But she is half guilty

For you are partly to blame

It's self brain-washing

Some might say

Author's Note

Review please!!!

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Oh I bet you think you can walk through walls, Some are harder then others....

[beautiful dreamer]

god you could be my personality twin! like seriously girl. message me sometime. you seem so great and like me. don't listen to those voices in your head they LIE. you are AMAZING!

[C.C. Marx]

Awwww thanks girl, you don't seem half bad yourself :P Its weird how some times people are exactly alike though they've never met

[Lover Of Words]

Lovely job my friend

[C.C. Marx]

Aww thanks Kelsey, I appreciate the review!!

[Sam Gregory]

You have good personification here, worked really well, had more of an impact. I thought the flow of it was a bit slow though, may be just how I read it. Overall good work :)

[C.C. Marx]

Not one of my best but it hit me at like 3 in the morning lol thanks for reviewing

[Sam Gregory]

Np

[Rose Kavanagh]

Really well-written. I love that you referred to doubt as "a tricky little devil", that's such an accurate description and brings to mind a malicious little imp that whispers into people's ears.

Lovely poem!

[C.C. Marx]

Such a little bother that one ;) well thank you very much for reviewing!!!

[RachelReaper]

I love that in this poem you personified Doubt, in an essence, to be a mind of her own in a way. That doubt is alive in everyone, but that you also said that you are partly to blame if you give in or listen to Doubt too much. Or, at least, that is what I thought of it. Excellent!

[C.C. Marx]

That is exactly what I was going for!! Thanks for reviewing rachel

[RachelReaper]

your welcome :)

[Ellen Henry]

Totally agree! I think we all have a darkness inside of us. :) Well written.

[C.C. Marx]

And I also agree with that. Thank you very much for reviewing!!!