Mrs. Popularity

just a little vented frustration

Such superficial aspirations
They plague you my dear
Tell me darling
Is your mind lonely?
No penny for a thought
For you cannot pay for nothing
Your imagination
So predictable and stereotypical
So dull and lacking
Much like your personality
Oh how you poke fun
At the unique and different
Though they have
The courage to be an original
Dear Barbie incarnate
I only wish to share the truth
You are as interesting as
The plastic doll you resemble.

Author's Note

Review please!! (ps if you are a popular, good for you. This was not meant to offend, just poking a little fun a some girls I know)

Reviews

[Alexa Tasch]

You have just described in a beautiful poem the reason why I hate high school. Some poeple think they are popular just because they do stupid things and call themselves unique but fail to realize that it is no longer unique when you convince every one of your airhead friends to do the same thing. Woah. Sorry for the little rant there!! Nice piece as always!!

[C.C. Marx]

I was hoping you would stop by and rant!! Don't worry kiddo I feel the exact same way, why do u think I wrote it!!! Thanks for the reviee

[Alexa Tasch]

You're welcome!! And don't calll me Kiddo, we're practically the same age!!

[C.C. Marx]

I call everyone kiddo, no matter how much older they are :ppp

[Alexa Tasch]

:PPP

[KeeD]

Haha Amen to that. I despise fake people because they despise originality it's as simple as that. Loved your poem, great write.

[C.C. Marx]

Fake as the plastic they use in their noses :) thanks for stopping by

[Emma Ruth]

I think you speak on behalf of a lot of girls and women here; thanks for sharing! :)

[C.C. Marx]

Thank you!!' I think in some way we can all relate

[Em]

I love this. It is so great. High school "popular" girls are so mean. I enjoyed this very much. Great job!

[C.C. Marx]

Thank you very much!!! They really are though I love the movie :)

[Em]

Yes the movie is rather good! I think it is a guilty pleasure for many people.

[C.C. Marx]

Guilty as charged :ppp thanks again for reviewing!!!

[Em]

Welcome:)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Oh yes, how true is this. I love it. Well said :)

[C.C. Marx]

Thank you, thank you!!

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

You're welcome C.C :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed tou rammed the message home my dear, well done good read

[C.C. Marx]

Thank you, everyone goes through high school once right? Some more enjoyable than others but memories all the same. Thanks for reviewing!!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! :-D This is great...how the hell did I miss this one??

[C.C. Marx]

It happens to the best of us haha, thanks for reviewing!!

[KAOlmsted]

I am blaming my selective senility ;-) My pleasure, always.

[C.C. Marx]

nothing wrong with being selective, or senile!! we accept everyone here on WC, whether your mentally sound or questionable :PPP

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[Sam Gregory]

I can definately relate to this, I remember these people from highschool haha. Good write :)

[C.C. Marx]

ahhh high school, you never forget it do ya? haha well thanks for the review!!

[Sam Gregory]

haha I'm 19 so my memory of high school is still very good lol

[C.C. Marx]

Id bet lol well still being a high school kid im living the dream everyday!!

[Sam Gregory]

Oh god haha, I hated highschool until iI was 16. College was worse imo

[C.C. Marx]

well I have yet to see the wonderfulness that high school has to offer, well except giving me stuff to write about occasionally

[Sam Gregory]

haha, when i was 15 I didnt do any work for 6 months lol... I smh@myself.

[C.C. Marx]

Haha tsk tsk on you!! Its all good, I will go weeks without putting anything up for multiple reasons, usually writers block

[Sam Gregory]

Writers block sucks, i smh@ it

[C.C. Marx]

Nothing worse, you wanna write something but you cant think of anything ughh its the worst

[Sam Gregory]

I just had it all day, just written somethin now tho :)

[C.C. Marx]

thats good, its been awhile since ive posted, been a lot on my mind lately!!

[Sam Gregory]

Write it out! :)

[C.C. Marx]

none of it would make a very good piece, its all so random and dsyfunctional, this week has been a strange one

[Sam Gregory]

Dysfunctional? That could make a good poem, and title of a poem :) Often bad things inspire me to write, but necassarily about those particular things

[C.C. Marx]

maybe, i just...cant really express or make sense of things, sometimes bad times inspire me too but lord would that be one weird-a*s poem!!

[Sam Gregory]

Weird is cool

[C.C. Marx]

is that a sneaky way of telling me i should write a poem?!?!?! :PP

[Sam Gregory]

No, it was very blunt in fact :P

[C.C. Marx]

haha I like, most people don't appreciate my bluntness, I will see what I can do

[Sam Gregory]

U better! lol

[C.C. Marx]

if u pressure me I won't do it, I don't react well to forceful pressuring!!!

[Sam Gregory]

*DROPKICK*

[C.C. Marx]

ok now I'm being both mentally and physically abused on my own page.......does anyone else see the humor in this????

[Sam Gregory]

:)

[C.C. Marx]

oh and now all I get is a smilEly face in response?!? that's it I'm not writing any poems on my issues!!!

[Sam Gregory]

Write one about ur issue with me dropkicking u lol

[C.C. Marx]

Welll besides the fact it is domestic violence it is also quite rude, how would u like it if I just went up to ya and kicked u in the shins?!!!

[Sam Gregory]

I'd take it as a challenge lol, but ouch lol

[C.C. Marx]

Challenge eh? I like challenges

[Sam Gregory]

Challenges are cool haha

[C.C. Marx]

Haven't met a challenge or dare I wont take, lets just say someone is a little lacking in the common sense department :pp

[Sam Gregory]

The shop was out of common sense :P

[C.C. Marx]

Exactly that's ok, I got a boatload of good looks, charming personality, intelligence, and a hint of modesty :pppp

[Sam Gregory]

I have the biggest ego ever! lol jk

[C.C. Marx]

Hey if you do, good for you. I like people who know what they want and don't stop till they get it

[Sam Gregory]

lolol

[C.C. Marx]

Dear lord, one word answers irks me :ppp

[Sam Gregory]

Yes :P

[C.C. Marx]

Not. Nice.

[Sam Gregory]

Really?

[C.C. Marx]

Your frustrating me, I don't like be frustrated it makes me want desserts

[Sam Gregory]

Mmmmm.. desserts

[C.C. Marx]

Ive eaten 7 cupcakes today, see what you've done?!?

[Sam Gregory]

Written lyrics, done housework, and said alot of one word responses.. lol

[C.C. Marx]

And irritated C.C. which id by the way very easy as you can tell I think my day was more productive

[Sam Gregory]

Well I dont work or go to college or anythin, so housework and music is my job, well, jobs :)

[C.C. Marx]

I go to school, kick a ball around while getting hipchecked by sweaty girls, do he, sleep and eat, those are my wonderful jobs

[Sam Gregory]

haha

[C.C. Marx]

Don't u start with those one word answers I will stop replying

[Sam Gregory]

Well, ur the one that's made this convo last a week :P lol

[C.C. Marx]

Fine if u don't wanna have a conversation I will stop it :pp

[Sam Gregory]

FINE THEN! :p haha

[C.C. Marx]

But I'm getting the last word just so u know

[Sam Gregory]

Nah, just naaaah

[C.C. Marx]

Ya huhhhh I can go FOREVER

[Sam Gregory]

Forever is a long time :P

[C.C. Marx]

Well I plan on being around for a long time :ppppppppp

[Sam Gregory]

I'm immortal

[Sam Gregory]

In my head, the livin dead, killin feds, is the best of/
Images this kid projects while takin pills an meth/

[Sam Gregory]

Lol whut? ^

[C.C. Marx]

what are rambling about boy? Mehhh guys never make since.......Ps I'm not immortal I just don't feel like dying in the next century or two....talk to me in five

[Sam Gregory]

Oooh burn :/ lol

[C.C. Marx]

Just a little, did you feel the heat? If you cant take it I would suggest moving to somewhere cold....like Greenland :ppp

[Sam Gregory]

I live in the UK, that's cold enough :P

[C.C. Marx]

Ahh but Greenland is colder and icy, the perfect place for banishment :pp

[Sam Gregory]

But here is icy, very. Twas -11 last night :(

[C.C. Marx]

Ahhh shush we are getting a snow strong in my part of the States a good 1-2 feet of snow

[Sam Gregory]

We've had snow for so long lol :)

[C.C. Marx]

I'm getting sick of it honestly and we haven't gotten any snow days

[Sam Gregory]

I hate snow tbh lol

[C.C. Marx]

Big blizzard today, why cant I live somewhere warm

[Sam Gregory]

Coz warm is no longer a thing

[C.C. Marx]

I think the 80 degree weather in Florida would beg to differ :pppp

[Sam Gregory]

Nah, that's cold, so cold

[C.C. Marx]

Now your just being silly, I think someone has had one to many monsters

[Sam Gregory]

I dont like energy drinks, must be the horse tranquilisers

[C.C. Marx]

Strange I saw the hat and figure.....being an energy drink junkie myself but I'm sure horse tranquilizers are fun too....painful but fun

[Sam Gregory]

hahaha

[C.C. Marx]

Now I'm being laughed at, or possibley laughed with can never tell the difference

[Sam Gregory]

lolol

[C.C. Marx]

Dear lord not more one word answers!!!! Either your aiming to annoy me or aiming to end the conversation :ppppp

[Sam Gregory]

Ha ha :P

[C.C. Marx]

Oh two words now aren't I special?!?

[Sam Gregory]

Totally :P

[C.C. Marx]

Im beginning not to like you

[Sam Gregory]

:'(

[C.C. Marx]

Well u did it to yourself only you are to blame!!

[Sam Gregory]

*breaks down*

[C.C. Marx]

That will teach you......wait what am I yelling at you for again

[Sam Gregory]

Stuff I assume

[C.C. Marx]

Most likely, I don't believe I was yelling at u for nothing.....or was it?? I never remember things gahhhh

[Sam Gregory]

NASHKDNFJVRMLGVMRTBTRBTR memories can be meeehhhh

[C.C. Marx]

What????? What nonsense are you spewing out on hmypage

[Sam Gregory]

KDJGLDJRGRTGMTGTKG,DRG

[C.C. Marx]

Ahhhh my life why is this now considered normal

[Sam Gregory]

Because normality is an illusion

[C.C. Marx]

Noe your getting philosophical on me aren't you!! You bampot :pppp

[Sam Gregory]

:O

[C.C. Marx]

Hope your insulted there I don't appreciate your wise words

[Sam Gregory]

:O

[C.C. Marx]

>:(

[Sam Gregory]

Now now, calm down

[C.C. Marx]

Never tell a girl to calm down boy, warning it never fares well

[Sam Gregory]

I know lol

[C.C. Marx]

Especially not with me especially not with me :p

[Sam Gregory]

hahaha fair enough

[C.C. Marx]

Just thought I should warn ya for future reference haha

[CreativeStroke]

This was very well written! Definitely described a vivid highschool scenario in my opinion. I could tell you had some anger behind the piece.

[C.C. Marx]

A little, more a sarcastic way of poking fun, thanks for the review!!

[Darkening Shadow]

I like it it seems to have anger behind the words. Very descriptive too.

[C.C. Marx]

Just a tad lol thank you for reviewing

[Darkening Shadow]

Ur welcome