Goodby for now

Goodby for now

A Poem by C.C. Marx
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for my sister's friend whose dad died a few days ago...thinking about giving this too her

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The story

Has come to a close

You think about

All the times that you shared

You’ll never forget

All the wisdom that he gave

The love he had for you

Was always sincere

 Forgive his mistakes

And let go of the wrongs

Remember him

As the person you cherished

Time will pass

And your heart will heal

But never forget

He is watching over you

Loving and caring from afar

Watching as you grow old

He will be waiting

Counting the days

Until he sees you again.

© 2012 C.C. Marx


Author's Note

C.C. Marx
review please

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Ahhh I loved this! Made me think of my friend that I lost over a year ago and what he is doing right now. Thank you so much for sharing this piece :) It definitely touched me!
One mistake though... You forgot the 'e' in goodbye in your title. Easy fix!
Thank you again for sharing this

~Erinne

Posted 12 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

12 Years Ago

Ya i realized that but I've been lazy lol I glad you liked it I was hoping you would :)
This is sweet. I think you should give it to her

Posted 12 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

12 Years Ago

you think so? thx for the review :)
Alexa Tasch

12 Years Ago

yes I do. And you're welcome!
But never forget

He is watching over you

Loving and caring from afar

Watching as you grow old

He will be waiting

Counting the days

Until he sees you again.

very nice :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

12 Years Ago

thanks! I appreciate the review :)
Sirius King

12 Years Ago

ur welcome :-)
Great story love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

12 Years Ago

thanks I can always count on you for a review :)
Lover Of Words

12 Years Ago

LOL yep

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My friends call me C which is short for.....Anyways let's share a little about me, shall we? I write because it gives me a way to say things I've never had the courage to explain or tell others. Ther.. more..

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