Anger

Pissed right now and well angry-writing....be nice please

Blinding rage

Fists clench

Jaw tightens

The moment is here

Got to live now

Come up swinging

And connect

Fury explodes

I lose myself

Violence consumes

I can’t think straight

Right from wrong

Wrong from right

They blur together

I breathe

I think

I realize

I’m wrong

I can’t let

The anger control me

Fighting isn’t the answer

But it doesn’t matter

The damage is done

I fought

Before I thought

My impulse

Blinded me once more.

Author's Note

Review or not....

Reviews

[marie]

great job you have captured how most of us react with rage inside of us

[C.C. Marx]

thx for the review

[marie]

no prob :)

[Faffy]

I don't think people really understand how beautiful it is to get into somebodies head and know what they think and feel when they are happy or sad or in this case angry. I love the pace an rhythm it just feels like a fit. Those last two line I love! They were spectacular because they show a sense of realization to the havock and damage done from the anger.

Well done enjoied it a lot :)

-Roshan

[C.C. Marx]

Thx your comments are always welcome here! I'm glad you enjoy the little visit in my mind, I think I've told you about my explosive anger and often after I say things, I regret them

[Faffy]

Well I know you turn in to a red hulking 5' 3" ball of redness when you rage but that's about it :P

[Faffy]

And you are most welcome :)

[C.C. Marx]

Haha and actually its 5'2.5'' get it right :P

[Faffy]

Haha well I'm sorry :P

[C.C. Marx]

Don't apologize if you don't truly mean it :)

[Faffy]

I'm always sincere to people who are mini versions of the hulk :)

[C.C. Marx]

That is probably wise considering what I'm capable of :P

[Dylan Evans]

I liked it, very nice, quick and emotional. What else does a poem need.
Nice Write

[C.C. Marx]

Thx! Reviews are always appreciated

[Forever Hidden]

WOOOOOWWWW

Loovvvveee it! Haha exactly what I do when I'm angry XD

[C.C. Marx]

Haha I'm glad you can relate

[Freckled Princess]

Wow. I love this poem! So simple yet so passionate with emotion and your outburst of rage. Overwhelming.

[C.C. Marx]

Thx a lot lets just say it was very spur of the moment and I was very annoyed

[Lover Of Words]

I like this one made your feelings very clear and to the point
Nice Write

[C.C. Marx]

thanks you very much, comments are always appreciated :)

[Fuego31]

I might have to read this sometime again when I'm really angry. Something about the expression of the fury was relaxing, it just flowed.

[C.C. Marx]

thx and like I said I was very angry and now that I read it again, i seem slightly mentally unstable