Sometimes

Not one of my best, but enjoy anyways :)

Sometimes

I think about

If there was an us.

Sometimes

I wonder if

You even see me there.

Sometimes

I question if

You even really care for me.

 

Sometimes

You act like

Someone that you’re not.

Sometimes

You hurt people

Without even knowing it.

Sometimes

You’re oblivious to

What is right in front of you.

 

Sometimes

Things will happen

For reasons we can’t explain.

Sometimes

We have no

Control over what we do.

Sometimes

We need to

Get our heads out of the clouds.

 

Sometimes

I need someone

You need someone

We all need someone

There when things goes wrong.

Sometimes, I wonder…

 

Author's Note

Review please

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

ik the feeling. as we always say i got choo girl. great poem sis

[C.C. Marx]

Thanks for all these reviews girl!! I haven't some of these pieces for months

[Tarry Franck]

This is very good and I truly can relate to this - Wonderful job.

[C.C. Marx]

thanks Tarry, I appreciate you stopping by :)

[Lover Of Words]

Very nicley writen. I like this one a lot very strong words many people feel i know that for a fact Wonderful write

[C.C. Marx]

Thx a lot! I'm glad you took the time to review it

[Lover Of Words]

My dear pleasure nice work

[MachinaWriter]

A very evocative, powerful poem that I'm sure many can relate to. I loved that last stanza.

"Sometimes
I need someone
You need someone
We all need someone
There when things go wrong.
Sometimes, I wonder..."

Great work, thank you for sharing this piece ^^

[C.C. Marx]

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[MachinaWriter]

Of course. It was my pleasure. ^^

[Fuego31]

It's realistic and simplistic. I like it

[C.C. Marx]

thx its not one of my best but writers block

[Faffy]

the repetition really add that extra layer in bringing out an emotion of frustration and longing but yes i agree it isnt really your best work but none the less still great

-Roshan

[C.C. Marx]

thx and I was mad so this was angry-writing lol thx for curing my boredom

[Faffy]

hhaha i could tell and i needed something to do as well so its a win win win! the last win was because you help inspire me! so thanks =)

[C.C. Marx]

I did? huh....BONUS!!!! WINNING

[Faffy]

HAHA =)

[C.C. Marx]

I feel very accomplished right now

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem. Well penned.

[C.C. Marx]

Thanks! Im glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

I do. You are welcome.