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A Poem by mrs.poet
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This is personaly my favorite but I've seen better. ;p

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I love you . . .

the way peanut butter loves Jelly.

I need you . . .

the way cookie needs dough.

I talk about you . . .

the way a sports fan talks about sports.

I think of you . . .

the way people think of food.

I can't be without you . . .

the way a balloon can't be without air.

That's exactly how I feel about you! <3

© 2011 mrs.poet


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Personally, not ripping on you or anything, because I do like this poem, but I think you should come up with something deeper than an "Ipod can't be without headphones". Because in reality, if you have an Ipod touch, it can be without headphones. But all in all I do like this poem. So ya, you dont have to listen to the rest of my rant. :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Personally, not ripping on you or anything, because I do like this poem, but I think you should come up with something deeper than an "Ipod can't be without headphones". Because in reality, if you have an Ipod touch, it can be without headphones. But all in all I do like this poem. So ya, you dont have to listen to the rest of my rant. :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 18, 2011
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mrs.poet
mrs.poet

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I just started writing poetry but I kind of like it :) I love to play sports and eat but I especially love laughing and writing more..

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