Evil

Evil

A Poem by Scott S
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I simply decided to try to put some words together, that conjured images of an evil, sick person. It's nobody that I know, in case you are wondering.

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I haven't heard from you
In quite some time
Are you hunkered down
In your twisted lair?
Plotting, grinning?

All of the trees around you have died
Nothing can live
In your venomous world
That gives you asylum
From God's wrath

Misery thrives  
In the decay of your mind
A beast within
That can only be squelched 
By the cosmos death

Dwell on in your cave
With your saccharine smile
You will have some explaining to do
The next time
There's a knock at your door

© 2012 Scott S


Author's Note

Scott S
I have absolutely no idea where this came from, or what inspired me to write it. It is simply my attempt to bring to mind, true evil in a person. Perhaps it comes from my years of service in law enforcement. But rest assured, everything is okay in my mind.....I 'm not slipping over the edge here.....lol.

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its a extream writing...
thanks for sharing the words....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Scott S

11 Years Ago

Hi Glitch,
Thanks very much for reviewing my poem. Much appreciated.
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

its fine...actually evil and hitler one of the interesting subjects for me...im a weird...i cant hel.. read more
I am glad to hear that you are not, as you wrote, "slipping over the edge." :)

It really was quite a strange poem to read but I guess one sees some pretty evil people when one is working in law enforcement, and perhaps there was a particularly bad one, just needing to be written about. Or possibly there were a number people, but all much the same, so that the end result was just this really evil creature ... At any rate, I think you achieved what you set out to do.
The last two lines took me by surprise but were a great ending.
Look forward to reading more of your writing.
Lizbeth


Posted 12 Years Ago


Scott S

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Lizbeth. It's a weird poem, that is normally out of character from what I writ.. read more
Lizbeth

12 Years Ago

That's fine, and it's good to see things that are totally different from the usual ... I am often am.. read more
Besides, it's good to step out of the box, and sometimes write something that is so foreign to what you normally write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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