The One That Got Away

The One That Got Away

A Poem by Mikael Viznphski
"

Every guy has a girl he calls "the one that got away,"

"

Everyone knows a girl,
The one that got away,
The one that you wish you had dated,
And regret it to this day.

Maybe you still talk,
Maybe its just weird,
But the possibilities were endless,
Maybe this is what she feared.

Sometimes they tell you why,
Sometimes they never do,
But either way, it hurts inside,
And you feel unworthy too.

Confidence is shattered,
You unworthy S. O. B.,
Thinking deep inside your heart,
"What is wrong with me?"

The secret you kept hidden,
Locked deep inside your soul,
Where it lied quiety biting,
Eating itself a hole.

Maybe she feels the same,
Maybe she missed it too,
You'll never know unless you ask,
Good will come to you.

A thousand days have passed,
But still you regret that day,
Some say that its too late,
But others, "what the hay."

© 2008 Mikael Viznphski


Author's Note

Mikael Viznphski
Some word choices could be better, i know... I mean who uses "what the hay?"

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Hey, this is good. But you could say this is fate instead of what the hay. Nice job on this, I like it. The rhyme scheme works and it flows really well.

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

137 Views
1 Review
Added on February 6, 2008

Author

Mikael Viznphski
Mikael Viznphski

Madison Area, WI



About
Relatively quiet guy (those who never listen never have anything to say) who uses writing as an out. I'm not the greatest nor am I looking to be, just looking for a community to share and be shared w.. more..

Writing