Helpless

i haven't wrote about you ever since you left and now here i am feeling so empty and much so, filled with regret. looking at you from a distance, i can see that you're happy and in love; with a girl whose name sounds a lot like mine. therefore i wanted to think that you're with her because she reminded you of me but that would just be absurd and i'd end up being a sin. i stopped writing, for i only write when ​i am depressed or in love. so i took a break, came back, and realized the reason of my return was not because of love.
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tears in my eyes, regret in my heart. i hear whispers all around.

​i am sad.
i am empty.
i have no one but me.
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but just once, just for tonight, will you please hold me and tell me you love me?

Reviews

[Eiram]

Maganda ang tula mo.Puno siya ng emosyon.Panghihinayang dahil hindi na katulad noon na magkasama pa kayo at masayang nagsasama.Ngayon kahit masakit at dapat bitiwan na ay mahirap talagang pakawalan lalo na kung masasayang alaala ang bumabalik sa iyo.Pero siguro kung pagbibigyan mo ang sarili mo na huwag muna pakinggan ang puso o kaya naman humanap ng puwedeng makapagpagaan sa nararamdaman mong sakit,malay mo dahan-dahan na palang naghihilom iyong sugat o sakit.

[snci]

Salamat talaga sa review mo po. It means so much talaga especially since you added an advice pa :). Thank you so much

[Eiram]

Walang anuman,gusto ko kasi mabasa ang mga gawa ng mga pinoy na katulad ko.