A Stage Away From Walden (R2)

Let the lights grow, let the lights grow

They'll only cast orchestrated shadows

Don't be a victim of disbelief

A failure leaving truth behind.

In the stagnant silence

Only a stage away from Walden

Permit yourself

a dream.

 

Among the hush tones of  pines

and the admonishment of birds

Is this task called humanity.

 

Author's Note

This was a tough one for me. Thoughts?

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a stunning poem, Stefon. Walden is a favorite of mine.. I love it for both its simplicities and complexities. I can understand anyone wishing to go live off to themselves in such a place. Love the ending.. we definitely are a task.

[Leslie Philibert]

and I join my fellow reviewers in liking this,a thoughtful, well-constructed poem,especially the extended metaphor in the first stanza is impressive, then the excellent tercet to finish. Good one

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I wanted to know more. You danced softly on a good subject. We are far from Walden. Hard to regain the place where we knew what was right and wrong. A strong closing to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[K.S.78]

"This task is called humanity"- Simple and beautiful!

[Rhea752]

I enjoyed this immensely. The undertones of nature laced with the meaning of humanity created the perfect balance in this poem. Well done!! Keep writing. :)

[Stefon Napier]

Thanks!