Ice

 

 

 

Water

                      easily

                                                      fills the void,

in the rocks cleft,

till the bitter cold,                     

turns to ice.

                                     Now bond destroyed

     and hope’s bereft

Source: flickr.com via Henrietta Oke on Pinterest

Reviews

[Nona]

You probably know that water keeps and transmits information, the ice is a natural informational archive! thank you for sharing this poem - it is very thought-provoking for me!

[Oblivion]

That addition to the description, regarding water, fits all the intended metaphor that much more. Thank you for reading.

[Holly Mason]

beautiful from the words to the art
thank you for sharing

[Oblivion]

Thank you Holly. I appreciate you coming by to read.

[emmajoy]

Brief, beautiful words; sad with the icy feeling of loneliness, Amazing how so few words can hint at a long tale

[Oblivion]

Thank you Emma. I soo appreciate you reading and commenting.