Puzzle Pieces

Jagged puzzle pieces,

my heart torn about.

a troubled lost soul. hopeless being.

drowning in my fears.

 

Misunderstood by everyone.

one September morning.

violently painful,your life is taken.

you left without me,

drowning in my fears.

 

Jagged puzzle pieces,

placed back individually.

a different beginning,

starting everything over.

facing my fears.

 

Finding my unique self

letting loose, being free.

living brighter days.

sharing times among friends and family.

facing my fears.

Reviews

[she makes me weird]

I like this. Very emotional and attention grabbing. I like the flow of it - not using whole sentences but making powerful statements. Great job.