Cycle of the Heart

Recent thoughts of the world today

The heart starts out as pure as snow

When once we're first conceived

The tragedy for which ensues

I'd like to not believe.

As babies we take in the love

With eagerness abound

We learn, we live, we laugh and cry

The circle goes around.

We continue on as young adults

Our hearts begin to change

Where once lived thoughts of selflessness

It all becomes deranged.

We focus on "our" wants and needs

It's all about "me" now

The important things we've tossed aside

We've lost our way somehow.

Who can say just why or when

The heart becomes so cold

Just know we have to change our ways

Before we get too old.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

I've always told people..anyone...when the subject arises; the hardest thing I've ever done is remain who I am. It's true because experiences in the time 'real life' begins to present itself, it comes down to how we handle them and who (if anyone) we have around us to help shape and mold. Having no one, I literally didn't like who I saw in the mirror and to fight to get ME back.
That said, I can relate to, for example, why I have met more than enough young people on this site alone in a similar place. It is sad that so many do not fight, but quit in some capacity. The "can't beat'em, join'em" or "if nobody else cares why should I?" mindset is the easier way out. Allowing yourself to quit, turn cold or bitter is easiest. Fighting for a better YOU is hard work. So (to anyone reading) you have to ask yourself, Are YOU not worth fighting for? If nobody else cares, that's a reason to care more.
Thanks for sharing this provocative piece.

[smurfett]

Thank you so much for your read and review. I agree completely. I have never been one to pull up my feet and go worth the current. I never want to lose my own identity to placate others.

[JB Murray]

Such a great lesson, and vivid truth to this piece. The simplicty of the verses are what makes this as endearing, and yet painfully honest as it is. Nice work.

[smurfett]

Thank you so much for reading JB. I'm glad you enjoy it. Sometimes that's just how I feel things go. And that's definitely the best time to write down your thoughts :-)

[Sami Khalil]

The title and the poem are marvelous. Moving by its truth on the cycles of love and life in general...:)...........

[smurfett]

Thank you Sami....I always appreciate your feedback. Hope you are well friend. :)

[Kym Stith]

So true. I think the heart is happiest when being selfless.Hopefully thru prayer
and reflection the heart can find its way back home.

[smurfett]

Thank you Kym. I agree....I am happiest personally when I am helping others. I do a lot of mission work, and it's exhilarating to me. Thank you for reading.

[Adam Whitworth]

There is a range of behaviours available for any situation, I feel that range remains constant.

[smurfett]

Thank you so much for your feedback and time to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe we don't lose the ability to love. Love changes in needs with experience and age.
"Who can say just why or when
The heart becomes so cold
Just know we have to change our ways
Before we get too old."
I have seen old folks holding hands and kissing. Our view on love will change. We will learn. True love is rare and precious. Learn to appreciate the folks willing to stay with us. Good words made me think tonight. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[smurfett]

I would like to think we don't lose the ability. Maybe if it seems people have, then the ability may never have been with that person. Some are straight up ruthless and evil. Not a majority...thank God. But yes, nothing like the love of an elderly couple. So heart warming. Thank you for taking the time to read. Always appreciated :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Love become different. Today, my life are my grandchild and my children. Wife happiness too and you are welcome.