Me

Just something that came to mind...

Lead me into the rain

Where my impurities can be cleansed

Follow me into the forest

On a cool fall evening where the stars will show the way

Believe me when I tell you

That life would have no meaning without you

Doubt me 

When I say that I'm over you

Leave me to be myself 

And radiate the light that burns so brightly in me

Stay with me, and only me

When the choice is so vast

But Most importantly.......

Take me...

Take me as I am

Reviews

[Latifa]

lovely,I really enjoyed it
Lead me into the rain
Where my impurities can be cleansed

Follow me into the forest
On a cool fall evening where the stars will show the way

Believe me when I tell you
That life would have no meaning without you

Doubt me
When I say that I'm over you

Leave me to be myself
And radiate the light that burns so brightly in me

Stay with me, and only me
When the choice is so vast

But Most importantly.......
Take me...
Take me as I am

the whole poem is consistent

[smurfett]

Thank you Latifa. I am very glad that you like it! Thanks for your time to read it

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the desire and the purpose for the poem. We must accept people for their good and bad points.
"Leave me to be myself
And radiate the light that burns so brightly in me"
Real love become true when people fall together accepting each other with open arms and no fear. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[smurfett]

Thank you for reading my work poet. I appreciate your input. And I especially like how you say real love becomes true love when people fall together...beautifully put.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Soooo sweet and beautiful. The sentiments are wonderful ...........:>)

[smurfett]

I appreciate your kind words Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................