Me

Just something that came to mind...

Lead me into the rain

Where my impurities can be cleansed

Follow me into the forest

On a cool fall evening where the stars will show the way

Believe me when I tell you

That life would have no meaning without you

Doubt me 

When I say that I'm over you

Leave me to be myself 

And radiate the light that burns so brightly in me

Stay with me, and only me

When the choice is so vast

But Most importantly.......

Take me...

Take me as I am

Reviews

[Latifa]

lovely,I really enjoyed it
Lead me into the rain
Where my impurities can be cleansed

Follow me into the forest
On a cool fall evening where the stars will show the way

Believe me when I tell you
That life would have no meaning without you

Doubt me
When I say that I'm over you

Leave me to be myself
And radiate the light that burns so brightly in me

Stay with me, and only me
When the choice is so vast

But Most importantly.......
Take me...
Take me as I am

the whole poem is consistent

[smurfett]

Thank you Latifa. I am very glad that you like it! Thanks for your time to read it

[A. Amos]

Follow me into the forest
On a cool fall evening where the stars will show the way

Above lines were magical nothing is more beautiful and peaceful. Than being in forest and feel your existence, while gazing in eyes of the one you love. You start my day with such a marvelous poem...thank you for that!

[smurfett]

Thanks Noel...I appreciate you taking the time to read. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I also feel it is magical. =)

[A. Amos]

I loved it you know me I write on love and its my favourite subject, your poem inspired me...you in your words represent love and heart of a woman. Yes for men the choices are vast...God I can keep going on and on:) you're most welcome my friend.

[Woody]

a sweet and tender poem. one can feel true love radiating from each line.
beautiful.

[smurfett]

Thank you so much Woody. I appreciate your read and kind words.

[Woody]

my pleasure entirely :)

[Relic]

This nicely done. Your sentiments show your love and beauty at the same time.

[smurfett]

Thank you for the lovely comment Relic....=)

[Mark Heathcote]

This is neat I like its concession to find truth and its intimacy to look for honesty. :)

[smurfett]

Thanks for reading...I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)

[s y e]

This is beautiful, a lovely conversation with a loved one. :)

[smurfett]

Thank you for the read and comment Poet...

[zainul]

Wonderful conversation with the loved one.
The message is clear and many among us may relate to this.

[smurfett]

Thank you for reading. I was hoping others could and would relate.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
Some are quick to respond but some keeps silent though agree.
You may rejoice for sharing the words of hearts of many.

[Sami Khalil]

"Stay with me, and only me

When the choice is so vast




But Most importantly.......

Take me...

Take me as I am"

[smurfett]

Thank you Sami...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................................

[DrD]

I like the simplicity that somehow addresses a matter so profound. I like the flow and ease of words, nothing challenging the mind but grasping the heart. A very, very good work.

[smurfett]

Thank you for taking the time to read poet...I sometimes wish that I used the larger more intricate words that other poets use, but I find this suits me better. I like being able to understand what I read...=) Thank you for your kind words.

[Riya Rashmi]

This is very beautiful :) Peaceful and soothing, it takes the reader on a magical journey by your side. I love it :)

[smurfett]

That is a beautiful take on it poet...thank you. That warmed my heart to hear that. Thank you =)