A house

Kettle softly sings

Snowflakes dance betwixt branches

The fire is roaring

Reviews

[IWAZHERE]

A lot is fit into a few words in just three lines. Each line offers a different image. I think the kettle "softly" singing makes the first line a bit special. The word betwixt works with flakes and using the word roaring as the final word keeps the image alive in the readers mind.

[Jade]

very nicely written and expressed

[Chryiss]

A haiku! This is actually the first one I've come across on Writers Cafe. I really love the first two lines, perhaps, due to the personification of the kettle and snowflakes. I also loved the alliteration of "betwixt branches"; not to mention, betwixt isn't a common word used.