Is my soul defective?

i ran away last night

in my dreams

i cried last night

i came apart at the seams

i thought hard last night

eyes wide

i hurt last night

i think i died

went for a drive last night

looking for something divine

i was alone last night

guess god was out last night

Reviews

[Jade]

WOW! So very well written and has a rhymatic beat to it. nicely expressed

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of a dark night of the soul. Apparently there was the hope of some type of mystical experience, but the end seems to have been disappointment. Where to go from here?