The way in which you have written the story is good for a novice, i can see the efforts that u have taken to make the story lively. i didn't feel bored while reading the story but i felt very sad for what our indian culture is going through in the name of socialism and lack of culture. whatever you have depicted in the story is true to some extent, and about the build of characters and vocabulary i will say it is good.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Hey Venkat.. Thanks for the time you spent to read this story and for your valuable comments... :)
The way in which you have written the story is good for a novice, i can see the efforts that u have taken to make the story lively. i didn't feel bored while reading the story but i felt very sad for what our indian culture is going through in the name of socialism and lack of culture. whatever you have depicted in the story is true to some extent, and about the build of characters and vocabulary i will say it is good.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Hey Venkat.. Thanks for the time you spent to read this story and for your valuable comments... :)