I'll come back

I'll come back

A Poem by smkb90
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The day I left Bolivia

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I’m leaving but I promise to come back,

I’m leaving for my mother’s land,

I’m leaving my Bolivia behind.

 

I’m leaving but I promise to come back,

Not even two full moons will go by

 

My dearest I must go,

Take care of me,

Don’t let me fall

 

I’m leaving but I promise to come back,

To the land that fed me from her breast

With her soft winds that caressed me at every wake.

 

My dearest I’m not going very far,

Remember the tracks

my footprints left on your dry land.

 

My dearest bid me farewell from your highest peak,

From that same peak you’ll welcome me back,

With the warm sun kissing my cheeks.

 

I’m leaving but I promise to come back,

I’m leaving for my mother’s land,

I’m leaving my Bolivia behind.

© 2012 smkb90


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This is deep and personal, Really love this write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The poem is amazing. Home is very important to us. I travel the world and ended 10 miles from where i was born. I like the description and the yearning for the country Bolivia. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, very well written.

You're a great poet and keep up the good work =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your patriotism and loyality to your country are very clear in this great nice poem. i have never been to Bolivia but whatever it looks like, im sure you are most proud of it. great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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smkb90
smkb90

Buenos Aires, Argentina



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I have yet to find a place to call home. i am traveling to find it, nine moths here, six months there. I want to see the world. I write about the places I've been to and the people I've met. And once .. more..

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