LONELY LOVE

A poem

LONELY LOVE

 

Tempt my loneliness..

Tether my loneliness..

Temper my loneliness..

Taste my loneliness..

 

You can see me…

 

It is for freedom I am longing for..

My wounds I am licking on

 

My doors I am locking by..

The songs of witches I am listening to..

 

My gregariousness I am lolling

To sleep…

 

I am what I am

In the attire of solitude..

I am what I am

In the silence of graveyard..

I am what I am

In the calmness of souls

 

Loneliness..

Elixir of my life..

I cant live without

Breathing you in..

Twice a day.. 

Reviews

[The Night Fox]

That's amazing, the sort of thing I'd put music to and have as a song.
Nice one :)

[Ruth]

You know, this ROCKS! To accept loneliness and pain, whatever negative emotion, it may be, we have to almost take it into our hearts, yes, it can blister and hurt, but hey - sometimes, we can become friends with it even and then we can purge lol Great work love xx

[Richard Williams]

This is good mix and alteration of poetic application, Good going.

[.]

brilliant work..oh I love the strength in this..the last two lines..divine..

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the photo. I don't like to see the animals lock up. Make me sad. The poem is very good.
"I am what I am
In the attire of solitude.."
The ending made the poem complete. A excellent poem. Loneliness make us know we need the gentleness of touch.
Coyote

[The Analog Kid]

My favorite lyrics on this subject:

"You get all squeezed up inside
Like the days were carved in stone
You get all wired up inside
And it's bad to be alone

You can go out, you can take a ride
And when you get out on your own
You get all smoothed out inside
And it's good to be alone"

[sweta'karman']

let us get blue again.......niceeee

[Dream Weaver]

Hypnotic!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great Write..!!

[Augustus]

Impressive beginning...almost like some sort of spell. Interesting build up in the second stanza. But the last stanza was mind-blowing.
"Attire of solitude".... loved the expression
Silence of the graveyard, calmness of souls...all apt phrases in the context.
A beautiful poem...