KEEP QUIET

wrote it for a contest

KEEP QUIET

 

Love talks aloud..

She tried to hush it

It banged against the walls

Of her heart that throbbed in

An adventurous journey

With a libido not known

To her before…

 

It jumped out …

This noisy love..

That she tried to squelch

 

It leaked out…

This naughty love

Through the chinks…

In smiles of her eyes..

In the choices of her words

In the blushes of her cheek

 

They said “she is in love”

She said NO..

There is no NO

In the NO of a woman

They were stubborn as a stone

They waited…

 

She said..YES

“I am in love” YES

They left her

They lost interest in her

And her love..

Now she is left alone

With her love

 

Keep quiet..

Let her love.

 

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

feeling a little 'sparky' this morning, are we

[Bubo]

It seems to often be the way.......once the words are uttered interest is lost.......beautifully written, with a great insight into that love many just rather not mention.