MY HUSBAND

Wrote for a contest

MY HUSBAND

 

First night he told me..

‘I am already married…

The computer is my first partner

My profession is my first love’..

 

Second night into our bed

He took his lap top..

Placed it on the top of his lap

Which was my seat in the previous night

 

I can never hate computer

She is ubiquitous….

Cajoling him tantalizing him

Sexier and younger than me…

 

There is something new

She can give him everyday

I cogitated over tirelessly..

How can I give him something new

 

“I am carrying our baby”

I triumphed one day..

In exploding happiness and bliss

He once again seated me on his lap

Sitting on the study table

Lap top ‘screen saved’ its single huge eye

 

Wonders came one after the other..

My children very often claimed his lap

Laptop learned to compromise

Learned to spare his lap for us..

No other way…

 

My hubby learned to log into my soul

To discover something new everyday..

He says there is much hope for research

As, he has more to discover in his wife.

 

He logged into me very often

Using the pass word LOVE

When he types that word

I open my all files in front of him…

 

Voraciously, with a never ending verve

He starts browsing ….

At each discovery he sighs in contentment

…EUREEKA!!!! he whispers in my ears.

 

 

Author's Note

wrote for a contest

Reviews

[Tracie D'Angelo]

You know I'm generally not thrilled over pieces written for contests, but I really liked the comparison here. Very digitally sexy in a way. ;) So happy you won over the laptop! LOL! Nice work!

[Daniel Gardner]

great work. i love the comparison's here. very realistic

[A.Lee]

I love this! I love the way you compared the relationship between you and your husband with the relationship between him and his work. Men often think that way, work first, computer first. It takes a lot of love and a great wife to open them up to other things. Nice work.

[Huggy Bear]

Love it:)

[Bette]

very very good. well done

[dovetailer]

Very imaginitive...I'll bet he browses your files at great length...lol

[Mauricio Montoya]

Only problem with a lap top to many dances and it will freeze. Nice work.

[Miss Coral]

Interesting piece- very unique. I don't know if it fully appealed to me, as the topic was a bit odd to me, but it was very well done for what it was.

-Coral-

[Tate Morgan]

Hi very nice

[Richard Williams]

The is very unique and the blending of the two subjects here warrants high marks. The images you paint are vivid, even a good degree of sensuality comes through; you have made Windows Ecstasy.