NATURALLY

NATURALLY

A Poem by JENY
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About nature

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NATURALLY

 

They call you nature

But I call you beauty

They want you to capture

But I want you to be my poetry

 

They say you are wealthy

But I say it is not amassed

They say you are healthy

But I say it is gifted

 

They say you should be tamed

But I say instincts can not be tamed

They say you should be utilized

But I say you are not to be used

 

You are to be enjoyed..

You are to be adored

You are to be appreciated

You are to be lived with

In you we are to be dissolved..

Nature, My muse, My God,.

Forgive their ignorance.

 

 

© 2010 JENY


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Nature is indeed a thing of beauty, at times, but it is often quite the opposite because its indifference. We focus on the nice, the feel-good, the pretty, but don't pay as much heed to the destructive. I have actually seen comments on a tornado..."it is evil." No, it just is. Anyway, your poem has much potential, yet it struggles in both flow and reasoning. Yes, we are to live with nature, but "In you we are to be dissolved.." (???) Come now. The poem also splinters at the very end leaving me at least quite disappointed. You are better than this work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Nature is indeed a thing of beauty, at times, but it is often quite the opposite because its indifference. We focus on the nice, the feel-good, the pretty, but don't pay as much heed to the destructive. I have actually seen comments on a tornado..."it is evil." No, it just is. Anyway, your poem has much potential, yet it struggles in both flow and reasoning. Yes, we are to live with nature, but "In you we are to be dissolved.." (???) Come now. The poem also splinters at the very end leaving me at least quite disappointed. You are better than this work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful~touching~
what man has done to the womb that keeps him fed and warm and amazed at beauty~ he has treated with the utmost disregard and violence through eons~
poignant~ and truly deeply moving~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Might thoughts exactly. Nature is
the true meaning of life and should
be respected..Beautiful write...

Posted 14 Years Ago


a lovely piece, truly lovely

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nature .. the closest i know to the Creator .. it pains to see our brothers plundering and destroying our Giver in such a shameless manner . even i ask in unison with you - " O mother earth ! forgive them " ...

keep such uncommon writes coming .

Posted 14 Years Ago


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perfectly captured the natural beauty all around us and our inability to just appreciate it without having to control it..well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


yes, nature is the name of our home...and we are foolish beyond counting

Posted 14 Years Ago



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