HE IS IN ME, I AM IN HIM

wrote for the cotest know yourself

HE IS IN ME, I AM IN HIM

 

I am a child

Who wants to suck

The n*****s of creativity

That will never wean me off

 

I am an adolescent

Whose heaven is in fresh love

That blooms before desire and sex

That fires and shares thirst for pure love

 

I am a wife

With two ends of my candle of desire

Burning never in unison

One for my hubby other for my baby

 

I am a mother

My baby gave birth to my maternity

I am toddling with my baby

I listen to its lessons in his cries and smiles.

 

I am a specimen

In the hands of the creator

He will experiment with me..

Till I know him; learn to live in him..

 

Till that knowledge dawns in me

I will have to play many roles

In this spiraling virtual drama of my life…

Scripted by him, especially for me...

 

Once my cells assimilate Him

I am boundless, like this sky.

My voyage to dissolve in Him

Will never be futile…

As, He is in me, I am in Him.

 

Reviews

[Ashley Black]

very nice job

[Taylor H.]

This is a wonderful poem! I love how you went through all the stages of your life from being a baby to having your own. My only flaw I see is calling your husband your hubby...its just a pet peeve of mine. I don't really like the word. Other wise, wonderful poem!

[Daniel Gardner]

This is a very good write. First thing that came to mind from the first stanza was who this is kinda dirty lol. But you did a very good job giving good visuals to express the fertility and strength that you have. Great job.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

passionate~ gorgeous write!~

[Dream Weaver]

Absolutely amazing.
I'm silently screaming..
Nice one Jeny...

[lavina k.]

A great one with a very beautiful subject that is "Woman".
She plays many roles in a single gifted life and she has to abide by the rules of this system called "Universe", and this poems shows how she plays her role in a beautiful manner.
Thank you for sharing!!!!!

[deeps]

This is amazing, wonderful expression.
Full of feeling. I like it

[the_stoic]

you are really getting better with every write . this one didn't have any glitches or maybe i was too lost in the matter to really care for them :) the title made me think that you have written this for someone you love (probably your partner) but towards the end i was surprised to find that it's the Almighty that you have been talking about . lovely write

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poem touches intimate subject with a polite pen. Woman are so many things. Without them we would not have a beautiful and peaceful world. I never can understand how anyone could hurt a woman. A woman is our mother, Grandmother and daughter. I like the story and the ending. Your words are tender and so powerful. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[indu]

loved the first 4 stanzas more..