HE IS IN ME, I AM IN HIM

wrote for the cotest know yourself

HE IS IN ME, I AM IN HIM

 

I am a child

Who wants to suck

The n*****s of creativity

That will never wean me off

 

I am an adolescent

Whose heaven is in fresh love

That blooms before desire and sex

That fires and shares thirst for pure love

 

I am a wife

With two ends of my candle of desire

Burning never in unison

One for my hubby other for my baby

 

I am a mother

My baby gave birth to my maternity

I am toddling with my baby

I listen to its lessons in his cries and smiles.

 

I am a specimen

In the hands of the creator

He will experiment with me..

Till I know him; learn to live in him..

 

Till that knowledge dawns in me

I will have to play many roles

In this spiraling virtual drama of my life…

Scripted by him, especially for me...

 

Once my cells assimilate Him

I am boundless, like this sky.

My voyage to dissolve in Him

Will never be futile…

As, He is in me, I am in Him.

 

Reviews

[N.E.T.]

This is of the most interesting and honest interpretations of ones beliefs or mortality, I've ever observed - how very beautiful & raw... thank you

[Holly O'Brien]

You know what...you are officially one of my favorite writers....this poem is amazing...I love what it speaks about!! The cycle of life and coming to know yourself!! I loved how you bonded these things together and then near the end you speak of something based on more than understanding...which takes us even deeper into the matter!! Again I loved it!!♥

[Angel Veselinov]

Great I hope You win the Contest with this one :) good luck

[Inci]

nice poem

[Huggy Bear]

Great write

[Ruth]

Really poignant poerm love :)
Life never pans out the way we think!
Awesome portrayal of that sweety :)
xx

[Richard Williams]

This is remarkably controlled, innovative and timeless; A striking read. Wonderful.

[Bette]

i really like this wonderfully done

[StacyPerry]

Usually I would not drop a comment on a type of poem that pushes me towards the "higher Power" aspect due to me being half unconscious, but today let's get creative here.

I liked it, I read into it that you are partial to believing in GOD and for me, as I am Agnostic and believe in the fact that SOMEONE or SOMETHING is watching over us.....plus a bit of all religions that this was so very heartfelt and I did enjoy reading it, so thank you for putting this in such a manner that didn't make me [personally] feel like I am "bad" for my beliefs, you had this well written.

[Randolf Ramos]

This poem is intellectually beautiful! It gave me goose flesh, a wisdom that is worth taking. You have described the true human spirit in its sublime state. the true essence of a woman, perfect choice of word.

A poem that is my favorite among my favorites
A poem the best among the best!

Thanks for sharing sweetie!