A THESIS ABOUT WOMAN'S TEARS

What men think of female tears…

A THESIS ABOUT HER TEARS

 

Talking tears

Emotional tears

Annoying tears

Repressed tears

Sham tears

 

These are her tears

Everybody thinks

All those drops have same hue

Redness of sadness in all of them

So many see them with pity

 

Thrice she cries for luxury

Eight times she cries for her child

Always cries for love

Repeated futility fills her eyes each time

Still she repeats the cycle

 

To her tears, men are much susceptible

Even if he fails to pour his own.

Almost always his eyes are dry

Replete with sadness unexpressed

Sorrows of him are jealous of her tears.

 

Tender is his heart as hers

Earnest are his feelings as hers

Ambitious are his longings as hers

Restless are his veins as hers

Still his eyes do not water as hers

 

Tired of his own tearless eyes

Envied of her tearful eyes

Annoyed by her sweet sensitivity

Researched results he released

Surpressed his inferiority in vain

 

Thus read his thesis about tears

Eyes that pour tears are cunning..

Anomalies can exist between eyes and tears

Reason need not exist behind her tears…

So, her tears too can be crocodile tears!!!

in the university of life...

all professors were males

everybody approved the thesis

thus they harvested degrees

research is going on....

in fixed static compartments...

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This begins on a certain note and then takes a totally unpredictable turn.There are just so many dimensions to this poem..i simply love once you start with..
To her tears, men are much susceptible

Even if he fails to pour his own.

Almost always his eyes are dry

Replete with sadness unexpressed

Sorrows of him are jealous of her tears.



Tender is his heart as hers

Earnest are his feelings as hers

Ambitious are his longings as hers

Restless are his veins as hers

Still his eyes do not water as hers



Tired of his own tearless eyes

Envied of her tearful eyes

Annoyed by her sweet sensitivity

Researched results he released

Surpassed his inability for tenderness..so so well thought,and so very insightful.It takes a lot of effort to write on the varying psyche..cause both male and female psychology have such an intricate pattern.Very strong and very very well written.

[Martina]

wow amazing,
very well written, and well explained.
well done :) I like it

[thinkwhat]

Very well written..

[Faceless Love]

Love the many layers of this poem. Tears can serve many purposes and not all are understood. Great work.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

A lovely write, you did a good job on this. I hate men who see woman's tears a sign of attention seeking or overreaction; I hate guys who cry those oh-so called crocodile tears,too...

[Ashley Black]

very very very good write nice job and very well written

[Dinesh Sairam]

"Redness of sadness" - I didn't understand that. 'Thrice' and 'Eight' can very well be replaced with nicer words. Acrostic poetry is for trying out different words and not to count. Simply loved "Sorrows of him are jealous of her tears", Yes of course we are :D The fifth stanza was mind-blowing, my favorite too. "So, her tears too can be crocodile tears!!!" - Once again, a line that didn't fit in. I liked the 'Envoy' kinda thing, Makes me chuckle! ;)

A job nicely done. Although improvisations can be done in many areas.

Kudos, Keep writing.

(If you wrote this for 'A woman's tears' contest, then good luck. Beware, 'cause I'm in there too, lol).

[Wicahpi]

A fascinating write; one that I shall reread a few more times.
Tears ... so many women use them as weapons, others to
gain a Want ... but genuine is most precious.

[Ruth]

Awesome!
I love the sructure here:) From a female writing this to the psychology of it, its just wonderfully written!
xx

[deeps]

in the university of life...
all professors were males
everybody approved the thesis
thus they harvested degrees
research is going on....
in fixed static compartments...

I like this closing part. It's truthful.
This is a wonderful wirte here, I enjoyed reading this.

[Dream Weaver]

Nicely done Jeny, I would have shortened this
piece to get a better effect of the word tears.
But that's just me, overall well written....