WOMAN

wrote it for a contest Nothing But woman

WOMAN

Woman!

Oh! She can create for the creator!!

Man is in her name

Almighty made her the beginning of man

Name and fame of him sprout from a womb

Woman’s womb..

Occult beginning of life

Mother is waiting to be born

After the child who is born

Nexus between two is the artist thereafter.

Woman….

Omega and alpha of entire family

Mentor of diseases of hearts

Assures her own niche in the minds

Nobody can steal the formula of her success.

Woman…..

One out of a thousand

Maintains the gift of womanhood that

Almighty bestowed on them with care and love

Not every lady realize the female in her

Woman…

Opulence of 20^th century

Made her forget her gifts innumerable

Anything left as a symbol of woman?

Nothing but her sexy breasts without milk..!!!

Woman…

Often degrades her self

Moaning for what she is not, she cant..

Atrocities mount, cheer and spawn..

Nowhere can you see their beginning but in woman

Woman…

Often a mixture of vice and divine

Mixture of wisdom and ignorance

Allocation of sensitivity and cruelty

Never ever should one believe a woman…

Reviews

[Ruth]

EXCELLENT!
I love the lettering of the "woman" down the side!
This rocks! lol
Woman is captured here in all her power, falls and positives!
Wonderful work!
xx

[Ed Hart]

you try to write with a grand pen, when you should be meditating in a corner

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. The woman in my life. My grandmother, mother and aunts were very kind. Without the kindness of woman. Men would have no purpose. In my lifetime I done bad thing to woman and received the karma back in greats waves. I learn to be kind and thankful for all woman. In this great word. Where will be without the softness of a woman in a life. A interesting poem.
Coyote

[Dream Weaver]

Very clever write. Take pride in your gender...
I really do like this...Very strong and endearing.

[the_stoic]

what am i to say .. initially i didn't like the praise that was bestowed but later you yourself have described that women are no longer what they were meant to be - nurturers , caring companions and the binding strength of families .

there are a few glitches (grammatical) but i have started ignoring them in your writes cause there is something good that always overshadows them . liked the way each word of the lines of a stanza made the word 'woman' .

it takes courage to come forward and write something like this being a woman .. normally no one likes to hear bad about their sexes . good that you did !