MY NIGHTS, MY DREAMS, MY FRIENDS

Written in a sleepless night, thinking of you, my friends... and the world...

 

                        MY NIGHTS

                 MY DREAMS

                       MY FRIENDS

 

Night

Ignorant of seductions

Gambol in electric lights

Histrionic moon paces along

Temple’s deity slept in a peace, pessimistic

 

Night

In the immunity of pimps  

Girls followed coyly

History smirked at king’s

Testosterone charged wallets

 

Night

Into this

Gates opened for Christ

Harbinger of peace and justice

Tell me where he has gone

 

Night

Imbeciles slept

Genius kept vigil

Honest went in search of

Temples sans idols and mortals

 

Night

I am dreaming of

Great days yet to be born

Hesitating, myself, to come out

To teach, prepare the world around me

 

Night

Ink in my pen

Graciously scribble languages

Hoping to pour out my longings, thoughts

Till this moment, which I kept to myself.

 

Night

I implore my friends,

Great writers of tomorrow

Have a look at, my soul, my blood

To review, to criticize, praise, guide, and admonish.

 

Night

Irksome however

Gruesome whatever

Honest, if they are

Tell me without diluting.

 

Night

Ignore who I am

Give up misgivings of my sensitivity

Help me to grow up in your criticism

To tone up my mussels of creativity..

 

Night

Imp,review my poems

Gunmetal, review my fictions

Hart-Ed, review my non fictions

Tate morgan you review myself.

 

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

the idea was good , but i feel the poetic feel could be improved and the flow seems quite broken at places.... overall i feel this has room for improvement

[Huggy Bear]

Brilliant poem:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Coyote is honor to review the poem. I like the set-up of the poem. The story was good in your words also. We can't be sensitive when we toss out our words for the public to view. Many statements in this poem were powerful. Complete poem held my attention and was outstanding.

Coyote

[Ed Hart]

I don't "review" much, but I always come take a look to see how you're doing...