VINOD

VINOD is my friend

      VINOD…..

 

Very sensitive he is..

Indifferent his countenance is       

Never told me, he loves me..

Orkut his favorite rendezvous

Dying to see me there everyday

 

 

Valentine day he hated

Independence day he was duty bound

Navarathri day he went to temple

Onam days were his favorite

Days of demises he cried silently.

 

Ventures he loved

Insipid when I am busy

Never accepted his love for me

One kiss on my cheek a day

Day will never end without that..

 

Violet is my favorite

Indigo I cant live without

No- colored water I need daily

Orange I eat every morning

Darling is an indispensable food for my soul.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Your friend seems to be such an amazing person. Lucky you. It's practically a piece that talks of various random things about him. It's strange how some things about him are so contrasting that they make him real. He is sensitive and yet indifferent. Gotta love human's contrasting ways.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Dream Weaver]

Wow! I didn't even have to put my glasses on for this.
creativity oozes from this Masterpiece. well done!

[GunMetal]

Another great acrostic. I can see what Yellow means, there seems to be an inconsistency in this piece, where there is not much story, some parts are nice, while others come off as sad. Sometimes there is longing, and sometimes there is contentedness. There is nothing wrong with any of this, it is consistent in that each line has a feeling. It seems to be a definition of your friendship with this Vinod. Very good.

[Tate Morgan]

very nice sentiment

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is amazing. The set-up of the poem made the words art. Each set of words made the poem stronger. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Yellow]

I like this one, its actually very creative, though i really don't understand it to much, but i like it. It seems that there is neither a negavive, nor a positive vibe given off from this writting. But i'd give you a 8/10

[Daniel Gardner]

Excellent job. You must have either a good imaginative mind or just to much time on your hands. LOL love it though.

[A.Lee]

Nice job with the anagram. V is a hard letter to come up with things for! Well done.

[Huggy Bear]

Love the anagram poem. Very creative:)

[James Watts]

Never knew that. I liked this.