Hello....

A poem about winter, written for contest

                 HELLO…..

Hello..

Wait….

Hold my fingers…

You made them deadly chill

Dwelling with me…

In this short solstice calm days

Your reflexes in my mind

Made longings spurt and squiggle

Which were icy before..

 

And now….

I am waiting for my time

To come out of this cloister

When the sun shines

To tell everybody…

That you winter nature’s magician

Filled me with new hopes

And dreams too...

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Very nice use of the "Ten words".....an most enjoyable read. Thank you for submitting this to my contest! ~ Helena

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the poem. The story was very good. Ending was perfect. We need hope and the warm days of Spring create life and energy in the tire spirits.
Coyote