Sadistically true

maya or illusion.. is a lady...female... and reality....is masculine ...rude...

                 Sadistically true

 

I have no fingers….

I have not touched you…..

He raises his fingerless arms…

 

I have no eyes….

I have not looked you…

He opens lids of his hollow eyes……

 

I have touched you….

I have seen you……..

She opens secrets of her heart…..

 

Those fingers are pseudo….

Those eyes are illusion….

Nobody can touch anybody he says……

 

With her eyes…..

She examines fingers….

And calls him a liar…

 

She knows not what is a lie……

What is truth….

Forgive her…..

He says.

 

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

I think this poem lacks flow and it could be re written in a better form i guess....

[MissWordSmith]

nice. can i give u a piece of advice? Stop copying material of old indian writers, translating, and then posting it here. it is silly, childish and immature.
And if you haven't noticed, let me tell you - there are indians like myself who actually use WritersCafe and know when stuff is your own and when it is not.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was really very deep and thoughtful, sad but indeed very strong and deep.
I really liked the flow of this piece a lot, it is so totally effortless.
Great work here!

[there is no more from m..]

A Grate Poem :)

[Emily B]

I will learn it by degrees
and I always hope for forgiveness