absence

Self explanatory

At night I sleep in an ice cold bed.
There is evil coming in the cracked window.
My soul feels pressure digging deep.
I cover up but still can't sleep.
The moon is bright shinning through my window.
A touch to my belly makes my body shiver.
Blood pumping vast in my heart.
Whispers echo this large room.
Who goes there.
Who creeps the darkness of my room.

Reviews

[AmandaFuller]

Ooh. The suspense. I love it! Wonderful work! Keep it up.

[Daniel DeLorez]

Doesn't sound like anything you've ever wrote before. It's good, though. Reminds me of my wife, getting scared over nothing (typical female thing, I guess). I really like it. Definitely paints a picture for me.

[jamykinns]

It's about a demon who lurks in the shadow of a young girls room.