..Fear..

..Fear..

A Poem by smilempsn
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Just like that :)

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I fear too much,
I fear too less..
I fear to get into a Bigger mess..
I fear to lie,
I fear to Guess..
I fear to tell,
I fear to Hide..
I fear to sit,
I fear to Ride..
I fear a fear of not having you beside,
Because that day all Memories will be erased from my Mind..!!

© 2013 smilempsn


Author's Note

smilempsn
I wish I had a reset button, that can set my memory....
Some people are not happy of not remembering things..... But me, Aahh.. I am different, sometimes I get sad, because I remember TOO MUCH..!! :( :)

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To me, it would make sense if you would want to erase your memories. If something bad happened, then all memories would want to be forgotten. Of course, I've seen movies where memories are erased. Then, the eraser goes in search of what they forgot. Often, they do not like what they find. Personally, it would be sad if I lost all my memories. I think it would be painful, like stripping away my skin. Memories form our experiences and our perceptions. If we erased them, then we would be erasing everything that molded us into our present selves. I would not want to lose that--even if the memories are bad. I think it is that we must not let the fear of the past affect us. We must move on, even if it means forgiving painful things.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

11 Years Ago

Very well practically said Black :)



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To me, it would make sense if you would want to erase your memories. If something bad happened, then all memories would want to be forgotten. Of course, I've seen movies where memories are erased. Then, the eraser goes in search of what they forgot. Often, they do not like what they find. Personally, it would be sad if I lost all my memories. I think it would be painful, like stripping away my skin. Memories form our experiences and our perceptions. If we erased them, then we would be erasing everything that molded us into our present selves. I would not want to lose that--even if the memories are bad. I think it is that we must not let the fear of the past affect us. We must move on, even if it means forgiving painful things.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

11 Years Ago

Very well practically said Black :)
I too am sad to remember even happy things in my past. But feais never an answe. Fear is something that must be faced.

Posted 11 Years Ago


smilempsn

11 Years Ago

I wish you lots of happiness Marie.... Many-a-times, happy times can make us all sad ...
But I.. read more
Mixed feeling right :)
Shared with fear lost in tear's this is all what life is all about. We have to fight back and get correction on and learn more and understand what is correct and what is wrong :)

Here i play my song... don't be scared my dear. Hope is the ray which will keep you up, steady and strong :)

You have such imagination I assume, you make people think twice and more ofttimes.

Loved it :)
Smiles & Hugs :)
Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

11 Years Ago

ThankU VikrantSingh Parmar, for those uplifting words.. :)
and ThankU for the review :)
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

You're welcome always Smiles :)
Singh :)
smilempsn

11 Years Ago

:)
A very nice poem. I think you have a typo.( I fear too less) no biggie. In some places I felt some good rhyming too...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

11 Years Ago

:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :).................
smilempsn

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on June 19, 2013
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Delhi, India



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