FriendShip Menace

FriendShip Menace

A Poem by smilempsn
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Just had some talk with my friends....And wrote this piece in office...

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To the friends who are near and dear,

I want to make it so very clear…

 

All the flaws I have, don't make it count,

All the sadness I gave you doesn’t have any account...

 

I had been mad since long now,

And I don't want to correct it somehow…

 

I feel sorry... I feel sad for the words I speak,,

But sometimes my mind cannot control its wild streak...

 

I know I put u under pressure,

But that just my love's gesture...

 

It’s easy to be alone rather being together,

As there is less heart broken pieces to gather...


© 2013 smilempsn


Author's Note

smilempsn
Wrote because many of my friends find fault in me.. I mean if I care too much, that also is a problem for them.. If I get angry on some small but valuable issue, then I take my life Too Serious (as per them)
I wrote and shared this piece with my friends.. just to tell them, that I know about all the faults I do... And I do , coz I am used to it now... And...

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A very nice confessional poem and acknowledgement of our faulty selves with an intention for understanding between friends...Well done as always...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

11 Years Ago

hmm ThankU Sami :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)

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Added on June 5, 2013
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Tags: friends, friend, love, gesture, speak, sorry

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smilempsn
smilempsn

Delhi, India



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Words Words Words.. Words are the only thing that can express what you feel. My perspective is 'The more you feel, the more u write..' And so I do write many-a-times.. I write in Hindi and Eng.. more..

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A Poem by smilempsn